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can i fill you up?
on brine, boosts and bronze.
I mean that literally,
we'll dine,
fuck
and dash.

The Earth is hollow but we still drill through.
Space is a concept evidently named.
I'm a warrior and you be the princess,
you're already rescued, promised to curses.
is a line is a line is a line is a line
and I'm in enigmas, sure by shore leaves.
sunken ships launch from the beach front
and take their ghosts,
a secret suicide.

If ants drew us and we marched past,
would it be any different, would it be any different?
in a line to end all lines,
and seductive co-workers fling their shit at me.
once primal, always primal, just anthropomorphic.
I'm just a collection of piss stains,
wrung out and forgotten
stinky and melancholic.
addicted to that pin-prick well,
settling for justice with a bucket,
we dip our heads into water and crack the rot over bemusement.

I hope you wake up
oh, god i hope you fucking wake up
i'm totally fucked up... and not in the good way. holy shit
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Given 2013-10-17
Melatonin Addiction by ~Summonaconjurer is a rollercoaster of fantastic imagery and clever repetition. ( Suggested by foraoises and Featured by neurotype )
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yay you 
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
yay me... i think my celebrity status has reached rehab levels 
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
a supported addiction, yippee
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
*cough cough... i'm very sick
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diphylla Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Congrats on the Daily Deviation! :pumpkin:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
=D celebrate with me
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013   Writer
A late congratulations on the DD! This one is great, and great to read aloud. I hope you can perform it at a poetry slam. Thanks. :+fav:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
=D
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chrislvssatsuki Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student General Artist
this is brilliant ^^ congrats on the DD u deserve it
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
haha cheers! it's one of my favourites
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
;)
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TheMoltenDragon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god, I love this. I would like it a little better if you focused a little more on punctuation (I'm a stickler for that), but I have seem some literature that purposefully used bad grammar, so maybe I'm just missing a level of your poem. Other than that, your word choice is super strong and the imagery is amazing. I suppose it would probably sound futile if I say I hope you feel better, but I do.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
it's good right! i've been trying to experiment with punctuation because up until maaaybbe..6 months ago i never used it. but yeah, everything that is written down here is put there on purpose. glad you liked it dudde
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er49563 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student General Artist
You should probably work on those "I"s, considering the i at the end there.  :/..  And I must say it seems a bit too jumbled and random, surely you can't be THAT fucked up.  We all have problems, dude.  I don't understand this or why you got a DD, but congratulations, still...  Moving up indeed.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
iiiiii don't know how to respond to that properly :P. and who the fuck would debate their own level of depression inside a little box replying to another little box? so... I dunno dude, this is how i and I write. i respect your opinion, and congratulations indeed. 

everything i write has a purpose. it's the readers job to fit the pieces together and find meaning to them. (for example: the 'I's and the 'i's are purposefully done... the upper case 'I' is my evil, aggressive, cynical side; the lower case 'i' is my passive, numb, hopeful side who always lets 'I' win... does that make any sense? :P look through my other poetry and you can see it's all consistent, and done with meaning.)
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er49563 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Well, how was I supposed to know typos meant anything..  I realize you put effort into this but it clearly doesn't make enough sense and probably shouldn't have a DD...  I am sorry I commented at all.  Just ignore me, please.  Sorry.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
no, you're not supposed to know anything about the poem dude =)... all that stuff just adds atmosphere, feeling and. i dunno, it's okay! haha... seriously it's okay. different strokes for different people you know
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er49563 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I can understand that.  Sorry for fussing around.. :P  Cheers.
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RisenDork Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
I've had 20 more years of being f-'d up than you, but I get your addiction -- get it, got it, tried to be optimistic about it, or morph it into visual art, because the words are always, without exception, lost on others... But you got a DD at age 20!  Revel in that.  Know you've been heard, whether or nor you think you care nowadays... Someday, you will.  Congrats!  I have refrained from posting most of my writing, because I am deluded enough to think it might get published or win a prize or something, so after this next wave of rejections comes, then I'll start posting, because if your words found me a world away, then maybe this is actually the forum I've been searching for mine.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
haha this site isn't for that dude, there are a lot of stuck-up people on here for a place that's supposed to be for artists... and yeah that's the cliche, the writer who hates his own community... so fuck, at worst just post it and then look at your progression. 
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RisenDork Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yes, I'm likely the cliche-i-est of the cliche... but one thing I'm not is a dude... Lol!  Artists are stuck up -- just the stupid ones don't know it or own it.  Thanks for being real.  it is much appreciated.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
too easy :P i call most of my girl friends 'dudes'... just a force of habit. glad to know there are other self-aware, stuck-up artists on here haha
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RisenDork Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
I figured "dude" was generic, but I couldn't resist correcting you, being the smart person who knows everything that I am... Lol!  It's so nice to have someone to joke about this with who knows that I really do think that about myself!  You're great.  BTW, I like your avatar.  Do you play ball, too?  That would be two things we'd have in common... I'm really good soccer, too (I've been playing for almost twice your lifetime!), but I've had to change my game a lot to accommodate the oldness and fatness factors. I actually have a poem about that, which is not one of my "well crafted," hoity-toity pieces, but it is real.  I'll post it -- check it out if you feel like it. 
Peace! 
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
you're awesome RisenDork
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RisenDork Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
How's that for serendipity?  I just logged in to DA for the first time in a long time and I just now received a message from my long lost friend! How are things?
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
good, getting back on the rails, hopping off and on the wagon... what are you doing with yourself?
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing! Congrats on the DD~
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
=D let's celebrate
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LoveDavid Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic. Reminds me I need to take acid again, for sure. These broken, racing thoughts... I miss it.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
haha sure, let us know how it goes... this poem is definitely a cleaned-up stream of consciousness. there are a lot of connections throughout, though, so i mean..anyways i'm glad i gave off the acid vibes with the piece ;)
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mizzmint Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on having your piece featured as one of today's Daily Deviations! :glomp:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
cheeeers, this round is on me!
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mizzmint Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome :heart:
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TERRlBLE Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Would be a good song :thumbsup:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
it IS a good song :P
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD! :dalove: Have a nice day! :heart:
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
first DD, i'm moving up in the world
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Ikoter Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Writer
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAH

All this shit and fucked up lines makes this for comedy.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i dont know what you mean by that
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Ikoter Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Writer
It is a good thing. Bravo on this comic poem.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
=D thanks dude
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BlueDiamondSnow Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If this is fucked up, then I hope you stay that way. "If ants drew us and we marched past, would it be any different, would it be any different?" Where do I start with the perfection of this?
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
haha i like that line too =). just a clever way of saying we're all fucked haha
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Imma-Duck Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Writer
I hate this one but I love this one. 
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
i know how you feel. it's starting to become its own beast though, my new favourite
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Imma-Duck Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Writer
It's pretty high up there on my favorite list of yours, too. 
But I hate it. 
but I love it. 

I'd love to be the princess.
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
you are my princess (L)
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Imma-Duck Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Writer
Is it a little narcissistic to hate this one and love this one because it's about me, and love this one because you're a fucking amazing writer, and be so proud of you? You got a DD baby :) You're a star.

And you're my warrior <3 
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Summonaconjurer Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
=) thanks princessssss... you have been my inspiration for the past few months. my poetry has gotten better because of it. <3 i love and hate this one too, dw
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